we are working on using descriptive language by sharing our writing straight onto our blog

Hey bloggers.The challenge we have is to describe a place using only six sentences.  After reading the description you need to guess the place that has been described. It would really help if you say what clues helped you come to this conclusion. let the guessing begin.

1. I start to breath really hard as the heat falls upon me as if it was twelve blankets on me when it is a sunny day.

2.I am inside an Island that is close to the equator and it begins with an A.

3. where I am has a large lagoon that almost covered up all the land in the country I am in.

4.I can hear singing in languages I won't be able to understand.

5.there are boats that give you a tour around this country and you also get to have a swim and see sea creatures that you can't see in New Zealand.

6. I then swim upon painful corals with a fish that looks like one which is named the Stone fish.

where am I? by Clara